Below is a piece inspired by the prompt at Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The key elements were the photo below and a word range of 100-15o (+-25).
No Words – 175 words
“But we’ve come all this way! Are you sure we can’t take a peek?”
“I’m sorry, Nana. The sign on the cathedral door says it’s closed for repairs.”
Nana takes a step back and cranes her neck so she can see the men high on the rickety scaffolding leaned against the cathedral wall. The sun glints off of her glasses.“You there!” she yells, and when they don’t respond, she calls again until the men look in our direction. “Yes, hello. We would like to tour the cathedral.”
“Let’s go, Nana,” I hiss, embarrassed as the men chuckle and point at us. They aren’t speaking English, but I know what they’re saying.
Nana plants her feet and puts her hands on her hips. She’s barely five feet tall, but her face is stony. She points at one of the men—clearly the one in charge—and then points at a spot on the ground next to her. The laughing stops.
Nana tells everyone the tour of the cathedral was her favorite part of the trip.
Nana sounds like a woman that is determined to get what she wants! Hahaha! Cute story and well done! I have noticed you haven’t linked your story with the InLinkz story board. I didn’t know if you forgot or if you need help. Let me know if you need help.
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No help needed–just hadn’t meant to actually post that one until this evening. WordPress got ahead of me this week! 🙂 Love technology–once in a while! Thanks for checking!
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No problem. Some people have been having problems linking up and I have been helping them.
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I love the idea of getting to an age where you can get away with breaking the rules…or at least feeling comfortable with asking for what you want.
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Who’s going to argue with a little old lady who has her mind set on something?! 🙂
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Nana is soooo adorable! Haha. Now, they better let her in. Or else. 😀
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Who could say no to a little old lady on a mission? 🙂
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HAHA! Nana really is so cuteeeee. :3
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Whose the boss now?
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I modeled the character after my husband’s late grandmother, a tiny wonderfully nice woman who would climb fences or do whatever it took to get what she wanted. I want to be like that when I’m her age!
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That’s a good plan.
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The power of grandmothers and their wordless directives.
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Nana, has to have her tour.
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Go Nana! 🙂
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When you know what you want…. Don’t Back Down!
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That seems to get easier as I’ve gotten older–that not backing down thing. After a certain age, it’s just not important what anyone else thinks! Thanks for the visit!
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